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Heres my heart
Take it break it
Im tired of having to fake it
I know I probably won't make it

Forget it
I regret it
Everything I said
These words are spinning inside my head
Words I wish I hadnt said
Words I've been spoon-fed
Im not quite alive but at least Im not dead
(Not yet anyways)

I wish I could be at peace alone in my mind
But my thoughts would drive me mad
Everything I had everything I had
Is it really that bad is it really that bad

©2007-2009 ~pulsesprite
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Submitted: October 19, 2007
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o.O um... I don't really have any comments for this one, just a poem I threw together from parts of two different poems I was working on. I am hoping to turn some of them into songs eventually, but I'm to lazy to come up with choruses and everything a song needs.
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NO ONE COMMENTED THIS!!!! Stupids. They're too busy with gaanaru fanfics to appreciate some original amazingness. I really like this, you are a great poet.

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An optimist's view of Murphy's law: At the end of the day, when it's all been said and done, everything you could've done right, you did do right.
This does have some good song potential, but take your time in doing so.

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"Thou art the unanswered question;
Couldst see thy proper eye,
Always it asketh, asketh;
And each answer is a lie."
- Ralph Waldo Emerson "The Sphinx"
:).... I still remember you journals.... So full of something normal people don't have..... HEY.... I like when you write things.

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I believe in the fourth wall.
I'm flattered :)

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You're so [adjective] I could [verb] you!

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